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    hey people, following are poems written by my iranian friend, please tell me what you think of them and I will email your replies to her, she has been realy depressed lately which you can see when reading the poems so i just want to cheer her up, so thanks guys

    Where Did We Go Wrong?A Broken HeartGod Sent You Back To Me Today!
    The Game

    Help God
    Love me too!

  • #2
    WOOOOOW......
    yassiii are you sure your friend is Iranian ?? cuz her poems are very well written both grammer wised, and are all very well meaningful... tell her to stop being depressed, love is a game thats why there are so many players in it.....
    also tell her she could use her talent of writing as a career... and I will be more than happy to help as much as I can ..

    Great Job
    Reza G -={DJ TAPESH )=-
    Founder / Admin


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    • #3
      thanks reza jan I will tell her, I keep telling her that the guy is not worth it, but she spends her time crying and writing depressing poems! and yeah she is iranian and has been in canada for only 3 years, ( although she speaks english fully, private schools and atuff) anyways, she wants to study medicine, but she loves poetry I think one of her poems was published or something anyways, I just emailed your post to her, so yeah, thanks
      ok g2g I am in school and the teacher seems to be angry!

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      • #4
        she does a great job but yes, i would agree, it's not worth it to pour your heart out to a guy! they dont appreciate it as much as they should and she has a lot more to offer!! it's actually true that some of the best doctors were english majors! poetry is such a talent and it's important to have such well-rounded behavior as a doctor! she needs to put so much effort in herself as she does her emotions in these poems i would love to be able to write like she does and her english is soo good!
        The glass is always half full

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        • #5
          she is crazy, last night I called her and she was crying so I got mad and hung up and then I really felt bad so I called her again, and she was crying again and I am like ok why are you crying cuz I thought she should be happy cuz she spent her afternoon with the jerk but then she was like, oh yeah he spent most of the time with his OTHER GF!!!!!!!!!! I so want to kick that jerk's you know what :x ! my friend is going crazy she doesn'y eat anything she lost 5 pounds last week! helpppppppp me helppppp her! I feel really bad for her!

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          • #6
            yasi jan can you have her come to the board so we all can talk to her and tell her our stories about our past jerks ??
            Reza G -={DJ TAPESH )=-
            Founder / Admin


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            • #7
              ok I will ask her when i see her in school!

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              • #8
                hi

                hey...i think her poems are great....tell her she has a real talent....she has to know that we all go through stuff that we dont like them to happened ..but well it is how life goes...but i also think u should bring her ...so we can all talk to her....dot worry we will do all we can to help u and her...so see ya bye

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                • #9
                  at least see if she will think about just saying hi to everyone and maybe seeing if others can relate and make her feel better..i am sure we can and i hate to see her talent go to waste when she express happier feelings in this way too!
                  The glass is always half full

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                  • #10
                    I will talk to her when I go to school tommorow, god I hate the jerk who is doing this to her, he is not worth it, and that big player crushes her feelings and instead she cries on weekends because she can't see him! oh my god, I feel so bad for her, yesterday me and her other friends went to her place and tried to take her out to a movie or just shopping but she locked herself in her room and didn't come out, she has lost so much weight during the past few days, and we always used to tell her to sell some of her happiness to us, she was so totaly diff before, she was like the symbol of happiness and laughter in school! now she is more like the symbol of misery!!! all this changes as soon as he starts talking to her in school and then as soon as he is gone she is back to not so her depressing self! if this goes on one more week I will kill that jerk! :x

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                    • #11
                      hey

                      hi again....i know how hard this must be on u....u want to help her so badly but some how u cant do anything....right???....we all know u and ur friends are trying everything but hey forget that killing thing...plz.ok answer if u can bye

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                      • #12
                        ok today, the guy wasn't talking to her at first and she was crying like crazy as if someone had died! I got so scared I thought she was gonna something crazy! but then I saw her with the jerk at launch and after launch she was like a diff person, so happy and cheerful I am lost I donno what to do anymore! :x

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                        • #13
                          yasi, tell her to ignore the jerk, tell her to have some self confidence on herself be strong, oon mardikeh class mizareh barash bego ke hala to yekam class bezar barash, that guys is jerk to leave her and go out with another girl then come back to her thats not right...... I don't agree if they get back together... thats my personal opinion
                          Reza G -={DJ TAPESH )=-
                          Founder / Admin


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                          • #14
                            hey I agree, but I donno what the F is wrong with her! I mean the guy is an absolute jerk!!! ok he has like 10 girl friends but it seems like she is under his spell or something, I swear to god if he hurts her, i will kick his you know what!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! god I'm going crazyyyyyyyyyyyyy, I don't even have time for my guy anymore! he offered to beat the jerk up but I don't think I can let him get involved! :x

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                            • #15
                              hi

                              hey i agree ..i think u should somehow make her ignore that guy..make her start talking to other guys or hang around with other ppl...make her realise that the guy is not right for her and all...i think that will help....and its a good idea to not involve ur guy in this...bye

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