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[Anonymous]

hey people, following are poems written by my iranian friend, please tell me what you think of them and I will email your replies to her, she has been realy depressed lately which you can see when reading the poems so i just want to cheer her up, so thanks guys :wink:

Where Did We Go Wrong?
A Faint memory of good times,
Your silent picture on the wall;
The unwritten tale of our love,
Starting when we both were small;
Growing up together,
Playing side by side;
Screams of laughter and joy,
When playing seek and hide;
Sharing our childish secrets,
Hand in hand walking to school;
Fall in love bit by bit,
That was the unwritten rule;
Talking to you on the phone,
Staying up all night;
Waiting for the next day,
To see your beautiful sight;
I thought we were in love,
I believed our love was strong;
I can’t see our mistake,
Tell me where did we go wrong?
What happened to all our dreams?
Don’t say they were a lie;
Why did you leave so sudden?
Without a simple good bye;
By Anna Shahidi





A Broken Heart
Remember how you looked at me?
Staring with your eyes open wide!
When my friend said you were looking,
I just wanted to go and hide!
Back then I didn’t care about you,
To me you were a guy like the rest.
But then you told me I was beautiful,
That’s when my heart started to pound in my chest.
My mind told me you weren’t worth it,
My heart believed you were nice.
My mind warned me not to fall for you,
Alas, It was late, you had broken my heart’s ice.
Then… she came back to your life,
She wanted to have a new start.
You fell for her once again,
And left me with a broken heart!
By Anna Shahidi


God Sent You Back To Me Today!
In the dept of my sorrow,
I saw a light.
Shining in the far distance,
Was your handsome sight.

There in my dream,
Once again I fell for you.
You were coming toward me,
I didn’t know what to do!

This morning when I woke up,
I wanted to go back to sleep.
Dreams are better than reality,
When all you want to do is weep.

Today when I saw you,
I felt blue and grey.
But then you smiled at me,
God sent you back to me today!

By Anna Shahidi


The Game
What can I say,
Life isn’t fair.
It’s a game played by many,
Winning the game is rare!

Help God
My heart is breaking,
Bit by bit.
You help me God,
I’m loosing it!
By Anna Shahidi



Your Heart’s Ocean
My life has changed so much,
Since the day I fell for you.
Before I didn’t believe in love,
To me it was a game played by few.
Not all these days have been good,
Some days I just want to cry.
Strangely I feel very upset,
God, All this just for a guy?
Why does love have to hurt so much?
Why is it both good and bad?
I wish it was only good,
It’s hard to be happy and sad.
But I don’t care how much it hurts.
I feel like a drop of rain,
Falling in your heart’s ocean.
Your love is worth all this pain.
By Anna Shahidi

Love me too!
I wish you knew how much it hurts,
When I see her around you.
You seem to love her very much,
I wish you could love me too.
If one day I can’t see you,
I get depressed and want to cry.
Knowing you will be with her,
Sometimes makes me want to die.
My love, what if she leaves you?
What if she breaks your heart?
Will you forget about her,
And seek me for a new start?
By Anna shahidi

[Tapesh]

WOOOOOW......
yassiii are you sure your friend is Iranian ?? cuz her poems are very well written both grammer wised, and are all very well meaningful... tell her to stop being depressed, love is a game thats why there are so many players in it.....
also tell her she could use her talent of writing as a career... and I will be more than happy to help as much as I can ..

Great Job

[Anonymous]

thanks reza jan I will tell her, I keep telling her that the guy is not worth it, but she spends her time crying and writing depressing poems! and yeah she is iranian and has been in canada for only 3 years, ( although she speaks english fully, private schools and atuff) anyways, she wants to study medicine, but she loves poetry I think one of her poems was published or something anyways, I just emailed your post to her, so yeah, thanks
ok g2g I am in school and the teacher seems to be angry! :lol:

[sherifeh]

she does a great job but yes, i would agree, it's not worth it to pour your heart out to a guy! they dont appreciate it as much as they should and she has a lot more to offer!! it's actually true that some of the best doctors were english majors! poetry is such a talent and it's important to have such well-rounded behavior as a doctor! she needs to put so much effort in herself as she does her emotions in these poems:) i would love to be able to write like she does and her english is soo good!:)

[Anonymous]

she is crazy, last night I called her and she was crying so I got mad and hung up and then I really felt bad so I called her again, and she was crying again and I am like ok why are you crying cuz I thought she should be happy cuz she spent her afternoon with the jerk but then she was like, oh yeah he spent most of the time with his OTHER GF!!!!!!!!!! I so want to kick that jerk's you know what :evil: :x ! my friend is going crazy she doesn'y eat anything she lost 5 pounds last week! helpppppppp me helppppp her! I feel really bad for her! :cry:

[Tapesh]

yasi jan can you have her come to the board so we all can talk to her and tell her our stories about our past jerks ?? :)

[Anonymous]

ok I will ask her when i see her in school!

[Gherti]

hey...i think her poems are great....tell her she has a real talent....she has to know that we all go through stuff that we dont like them to happened ..but well it is how life goes...but i also think u should bring her ...so we can all talk to her....dot worry we will do all we can to help u and her...so see ya bye

[sherifeh]

at least see if she will think about just saying hi to everyone and maybe seeing if others can relate and make her feel better..i am sure we can and i hate to see her talent go to waste when she express happier feelings in this way too!

[Anonymous]

I will talk to her when I go to school tommorow, god I hate the jerk who is doing this to her, he is not worth it, and that big player crushes her feelings and instead she cries on weekends because she can't see him! oh my god, I feel so bad for her, yesterday me and her other friends went to her place and tried to take her out to a movie or just shopping but she locked herself in her room and didn't come out, she has lost so much weight during the past few days, and we always used to tell her to sell some of her happiness to us, she was so totaly diff before, she was like the symbol of happiness and laughter in school! now she is more like the symbol of misery!!! all this changes as soon as he starts talking to her in school and then as soon as he is gone she is back to not so her depressing self! if this goes on one more week I will kill that jerk! :x :evil:

[Gherti]

hi again....i know how hard this must be on u....u want to help her so badly but some how u cant do anything....right???....we all know u and ur friends are trying everything but hey forget that killing thing...plz.ok answer if u can bye

[Anonymous]

ok today, the guy wasn't talking to her at first and she was crying like crazy as if someone had died! I got so scared I thought she was gonna something crazy! but then I saw her with the jerk at launch and after launch she was like a diff person, so happy and cheerful I am lost I donno what to do anymore! :x

[Tapesh]

yasi, tell her to ignore the jerk, tell her to have some self confidence on herself be strong, oon mardikeh class mizareh barash bego ke hala to yekam class bezar barash, that guys is jerk to leave her and go out with another girl then come back to her thats not right...... I don't agree if they get back together... thats my personal opinion

[Anonymous]

hey I agree, but I donno what the F is wrong with her! I mean the guy is an absolute jerk!!! ok he has like 10 girl friends but it seems like she is under his spell or something, I swear to god if he hurts her, i will kick his you know what!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! god I'm going crazyyyyyyyyyyyyy, I don't even have time for my guy anymore! he offered to beat the jerk up but I don't think I can let him get involved! :x

[Gherti]

hey i agree ..i think u should somehow make her ignore that guy..make her start talking to other guys or hang around with other ppl...make her realise that the guy is not right for her and all...i think that will help....and its a good idea to not involve ur guy in this...bye

[Anonymous]

oh well I am trying to!

[HonestAbe]

Anna,

You express yourself well. Poetry is healthy release for pain and joy. For every great joy there is a great pain. Life is full of peaks and valleys. Hold fast to the good times and they will see you through the bad times. Enjoy this part of your life and you will look back on it kindly.

As I have grown older, I have learned that limiting my joy also limits my pain. Responsibility comes with age. The level path is prefered by the laden beast.

Best wishes,

HonestAbe

[Anonymous]

i think she expresses herself well but you know she needs to put that expression in more happier settings. she should not be caught up with some guy that is not giving her the respect and care she is giving him. it's not fair to her and she will have a heart broken for much longer time than he will..if he even does. i know this may help her get over it but it does not sound like she is doing that..she is still obsessing over him.