Game - Rap off

[Raiden]

Aaaaa man this is gonna be fun...Basically we rap each other out...
Your familiar wif the rules...Make up a rap to diss/mock someone else (plz don't copy rappers and stuff)

I would like to go first but my 1st rap is a Revenge/Come back so I can't..

Note: You don't have to diss somebody...just rhyme about woteva u want..

[jjbb]

I hate rap and the junk they sing.......
any + and constructive out of their mouth ....NO......
all they say make young people's mind messed up......

[Raiden]

Its ppl like you who piss me off...u h8 rap? no-one gives a ****!!! Go home man this is a Rap off not an Rap )) Anti-Rap disccusion....such a moroon..:mad: :mad:

[RedWine]

Note :

jjbb, If you don't like this thread pls don't reply it.Pls respect to each other and also to the other users . Thx

[Raiden]

Note :

jjbb, If you don't like this thread pls don't reply it.Pls respect to each other and also to the other users . Thx

well said...

[golgol85]

this is going to be an interesting thread. I hope you start us off raiden:)
Its better for you to start us off since you started the thread and can give us an idea of how to proceed.

[Raiden]

Ok I have to finish it off first:D

[golgol85]

hope you finish it soon:)

[Raiden]

Finished!!!

Note: The Rap below contains frequent language

Raiden & Onerappa Tribute

I'm not the Greatest

Raiden - The way I come across, may get you a little lost, I’m just in it for my fight like Jesus died for the cross…
My rhymes are different, but still they make you wanna listen,
I only started beef rapping, when I joined this shit-holes mission…
Onerappa - Before then I was a peace maker, only to notice it’s a small crowd pleaser…
I’m not the Greatest, but still I’ll rep against the hades,
who wanna hate this…
I’m not the type to get racist,
I’m not the type to run to escape shit,
I’m the type to stay rapping till I make it…
Raiden - Its blatant, I’m ready and racing, to face em, this is real entertainment, its ONE there will be no replacement…
Convicted wants this title, to tell the truth I would give to you if you wasn’t so bone Idle, so now thats ment to be a battle, but this kid wont get a profile, so you getting this title is like me living in denial, its not going to happen…
Onerappa - Yo I’m not the greatest, but still I stand by em to make my placement its crazy, why these cats wanna hate me, but I can take it and thats not a maybe…
Raiden - Each day my style gets better, but I never say never, I could get knocked off by the next best Cheddar, or shot with a sorn off Beretta…
I’m not the greatest but still I try, close your eye’s,
to see the sight of the signs, and see me finalise rhymes,
like its a crises, killing of these little blighters, who try it..
Onerappa - Its OneRappa, the beat clapper, bitch slapper, yeah the pussy whacker, never an actor, Raiden you know I'm bettar so don’t miss the main factor, fuk this no matter.
I’m not the greatest…Raiden and OneRappa..Peace

[golgol85]

:smt038 bahal bood:D

[Raiden]

TNX...I'll give yo guys another one AFTER someone else releases one...don't be afraid no-one's gonna laugh (I've been rapping/freestyling for 2 years!) just give it ago...

[golgol85]

haha, this is not really a rap, i just sat and wrote it. You can laugh all you want, i wont take offense whatsover.:D here goes:


Makin a Point

I came to make a point and I did,
But the point I made was better of hid.
Homies never want to say their true intentions,
The cover them up under false pretentions.

Baby this, honey that, boo you are so fine,
But sorry i just aint got that kind of time.
Aiight, so I may be no super star, dont drive no fancy car,
But fo sho I have feelings that are up to par.
Friendship with me has no price,
Except that I give chances thrice.

Shockin others comes as a shock,
Especially when you just dont give a **** (i cencored it myself:D)
Point in case made,
I aint got no more to say so ill fade.

[Raiden]

haha, this is not really a rap, i just sat and wrote it. You can laugh all you want, i wont take offense whatsover.:D here goes:


Makin a Point

I came to make a point and I did,
But the point I made was better of hid.
Homies never want to say their true intentions,
The cover them up under false pretentions.

Baby this, honey that, boo you are so fine,
But sorry i just aint got that kind of time.
Aiight, so I may be no super star, dont drive no fancy car,
But fo sho I have feelings that are up to par.
Friendship with me has no price,
Except that I give chances thrice.

Shockin others comes as a shock,
Especially when you just dont give a **** (i cencored it myself:D)
Point in case made,
I aint got no more to say so ill fade.

Laugh??? It rivals my own man its amazing for a starter..
Here are a few pointers/ this is my remix of ur rap...hope u don't mind

Making Point Remix by Raiden... Original by golgol

I came to make point and I did,
But the point I made was bitter and lid.
Homies never want to say their true intentions,
They cover them up under false pretentions.

Baby this, honey that, 0oo you are so fine,
But sorry I just aint got that kind of time.
Fuk this, fuk that, smoke this, smoke that
I wish I could live life free of drug crime.
Aiight, so I may be no super star, dont drive no fancy mount,
But fo sho I have feelings that come up to count.
Friendship with me has Tri-zero price
Don't open another case on ma asss! God jesus christ!

Shockin others comes as a shock, BOOM!
Especially when you just dont give a fuk
Point in case made, Goin back to fourth grade.
I aint got no more to say so ill fade...peace out, dam...

[RedWine]

LoL .. raiden, you are a real rapper singer . :lol:

[golgol85]

shoot, that was a hell of remix! I love it! :D
Mind, not even. it sounds so much nicer! :)

[Raiden]

Tnx...hope you don't mind me remixing without permission...

Pussy Flappers By Raiden ft. Onerappa

[Chorus] (by Onerappa..)
These muthafukas don't know how to act yo, these niggas compilin and multi-task yo, I don’t know why these pussy flappers think there hot when they rhyme, I swear shit rapping should be a stage 1 crime

Raiden - Flapping N yapping, whack em I’m smashing, whip lashing the frightened, it’s tragic I’m mighty, the fighting has tightened, my style is to bowdy, rowdy like audi, these bitches can’t try me…
waisters who’s nameless, you players are aimless, move out while I spay this….bitch ur tasteless.

[Chorus] (by Onerappa..)
These muthafukas don't know how to act yo, these niggas compilin and multi-task yo, I don’t know why these pussy flappers think there hot when they rhyme, I swear shit rapping should be a stage 1 crime

Raiden - My direction is heading, strait for the government I said it, fuk the other men who’s prettending, to be me, you wanna be me!? Comeover bitch see me. Wetting the tempted, my raps aint eccentric, I’m always spiting the truth, spitting on yo Ruth, hitting the roof, sipping the fruits, you cant handle my juice, bitch stop fuking ma phonebooth!
step off of my shoe’s slick with the twos, firm grip for all you’s, who wanna get loose…

[Chorus] (by Onerappa..)
These muthafukas don't know how to act yo, these niggas compilin and multi-task yo, I don’t know why these pussy flappers think there hot when they rhyme, I swear shit rapping should be a stage 1 crime

Raiden - Kron no logic aint got it, style sounds like it’s plopping, I’m dropping the tonic, leave you spinning like sonic, I’m rebooted like Iz robotic…
there is no shut down, leave a mutt feeling like a clown, cut in your town, pushed out to run streets in your mummy’s gown, let me eat this cow and make him moo to my sound….

[Chorus] (by Onerappa..)
These muthafukas don't know how to act yo, these niggas compilin and multi-task yo, I don’t know why these pussy flappers think there hot when they rhyme, I swear shit rapping should be a stage 1 crime

Onerappa - lines so dry, and the sentence should be 15 to life, shifty with a knife, gifted with lines, sick with your nine, pull it out and I’ll make it mine…OneRappa

[Raiden]

aww comon...is no-one here up to the challenge?
As golgol yad begirid...

[golgol85]

hmm, ill have to think hard and come up with another one.
mine are just for the laugh factor, since i am not even sure i know what i am doing, but ill let you remix it and fix it up when i come up with another one.:)

[Raiden]

Note: I'm not asking for a full scale rap...a few lines will be ok.