Drawing...

[worthless_boy]

The Link Doesn't work anymore !

[djTapesh]

its great very nice but ameture but the potential is very much there

[Riaz]

that's very nice, you should not call yourself worthless, friend.

Something that immediately strikes me is that the eyes, at least to me, don't seem to be aimed in the same direction. One of them is looking at the viewer and the other (the left one-his left our right) seems to be looking at something to the side.

Also, the form of the back of the hand could be better articulated, and use shading to make the fingers appear more round/3 dimensional.

Also, I'm not sure the chest should be as dark as it is.

Very nice though

[worthless_boy]

thx for the critic,

i know ,it is more an sketch, and therefore i came here and ask anybody to be critical about this.

[Nushabeh]

ooo very nice

[Rasputin]

Is Ok ! .