hey people, following are poems written by my iranian friend, please tell me what you think of them and I will email your replies to her, she has been realy depressed lately which you can see when reading the poems so i just want to cheer her up, so thanks guys 
Where Did We Go Wrong?
A Faint memory of good times,
Your silent picture on the wall;
The unwritten tale of our love,
Starting when we both were small;
Growing up together,
Playing side by side;
Screams of laughter and joy,
When playing seek and hide;
Sharing our childish secrets,
Hand in hand walking to school;
Fall in love bit by bit,
That was the unwritten rule;
Talking to you on the phone,
Staying up all night;
Waiting for the next day,
To see your beautiful sight;
I thought we were in love,
I believed our love was strong;
I can’t see our mistake,
Tell me where did we go wrong?
What happened to all our dreams?
Don’t say they were a lie;
Why did you leave so sudden?
Without a simple good bye;
By Anna Shahidi
A Broken Heart
Remember how you looked at me?
Staring with your eyes open wide!
When my friend said you were looking,
I just wanted to go and hide!
Back then I didn’t care about you,
To me you were a guy like the rest.
But then you told me I was beautiful,
That’s when my heart started to pound in my chest.
My mind told me you weren’t worth it,
My heart believed you were nice.
My mind warned me not to fall for you,
Alas, It was late, you had broken my heart’s ice.
Then… she came back to your life,
She wanted to have a new start.
You fell for her once again,
And left me with a broken heart!
By Anna Shahidi
God Sent You Back To Me Today!
In the dept of my sorrow,
I saw a light.
Shining in the far distance,
Was your handsome sight.
There in my dream,
Once again I fell for you.
You were coming toward me,
I didn’t know what to do!
This morning when I woke up,
I wanted to go back to sleep.
Dreams are better than reality,
When all you want to do is weep.
Today when I saw you,
I felt blue and grey.
But then you smiled at me,
God sent you back to me today!
By Anna Shahidi
The Game
What can I say,
Life isn’t fair.
It’s a game played by many,
Winning the game is rare!
Help God
My heart is breaking,
Bit by bit.
You help me God,
I’m loosing it!
By Anna Shahidi
Your Heart’s Ocean
My life has changed so much,
Since the day I fell for you.
Before I didn’t believe in love,
To me it was a game played by few.
Not all these days have been good,
Some days I just want to cry.
Strangely I feel very upset,
God, All this just for a guy?
Why does love have to hurt so much?
Why is it both good and bad?
I wish it was only good,
It’s hard to be happy and sad.
But I don’t care how much it hurts.
I feel like a drop of rain,
Falling in your heart’s ocean.
Your love is worth all this pain.
By Anna Shahidi
Love me too!
I wish you knew how much it hurts,
When I see her around you.
You seem to love her very much,
I wish you could love me too.
If one day I can’t see you,
I get depressed and want to cry.
Knowing you will be with her,
Sometimes makes me want to die.
My love, what if she leaves you?
What if she breaks your heart?
Will you forget about her,
And seek me for a new start?
By Anna shahidi
Where Did We Go Wrong?
A Faint memory of good times,
Your silent picture on the wall;
The unwritten tale of our love,
Starting when we both were small;
Growing up together,
Playing side by side;
Screams of laughter and joy,
When playing seek and hide;
Sharing our childish secrets,
Hand in hand walking to school;
Fall in love bit by bit,
That was the unwritten rule;
Talking to you on the phone,
Staying up all night;
Waiting for the next day,
To see your beautiful sight;
I thought we were in love,
I believed our love was strong;
I can’t see our mistake,
Tell me where did we go wrong?
What happened to all our dreams?
Don’t say they were a lie;
Why did you leave so sudden?
Without a simple good bye;
By Anna Shahidi
A Broken Heart
Remember how you looked at me?
Staring with your eyes open wide!
When my friend said you were looking,
I just wanted to go and hide!
Back then I didn’t care about you,
To me you were a guy like the rest.
But then you told me I was beautiful,
That’s when my heart started to pound in my chest.
My mind told me you weren’t worth it,
My heart believed you were nice.
My mind warned me not to fall for you,
Alas, It was late, you had broken my heart’s ice.
Then… she came back to your life,
She wanted to have a new start.
You fell for her once again,
And left me with a broken heart!
By Anna Shahidi
God Sent You Back To Me Today!
In the dept of my sorrow,
I saw a light.
Shining in the far distance,
Was your handsome sight.
There in my dream,
Once again I fell for you.
You were coming toward me,
I didn’t know what to do!
This morning when I woke up,
I wanted to go back to sleep.
Dreams are better than reality,
When all you want to do is weep.
Today when I saw you,
I felt blue and grey.
But then you smiled at me,
God sent you back to me today!
By Anna Shahidi
The Game
What can I say,
Life isn’t fair.
It’s a game played by many,
Winning the game is rare!
Help God
My heart is breaking,
Bit by bit.
You help me God,
I’m loosing it!
By Anna Shahidi
Your Heart’s Ocean
My life has changed so much,
Since the day I fell for you.
Before I didn’t believe in love,
To me it was a game played by few.
Not all these days have been good,
Some days I just want to cry.
Strangely I feel very upset,
God, All this just for a guy?
Why does love have to hurt so much?
Why is it both good and bad?
I wish it was only good,
It’s hard to be happy and sad.
But I don’t care how much it hurts.
I feel like a drop of rain,
Falling in your heart’s ocean.
Your love is worth all this pain.
By Anna Shahidi
Love me too!
I wish you knew how much it hurts,
When I see her around you.
You seem to love her very much,
I wish you could love me too.
If one day I can’t see you,
I get depressed and want to cry.
Knowing you will be with her,
Sometimes makes me want to die.
My love, what if she leaves you?
What if she breaks your heart?
Will you forget about her,
And seek me for a new start?
By Anna shahidi
i would love to be able to write like she does and her english is soo good!
:x ! my friend is going crazy she doesn'y eat anything she lost 5 pounds last week! helpppppppp me helppppp her! I feel really bad for her! 
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