When You're Acquainted With Eshq

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  • Khorsheed
    Member
    • Nov 2006
    • 540

    #1

    When You're Acquainted With Eshq

    Funny things happen when you're in love
    You seem to loose your since of wisdom
    And start to act foolishly
    Suddenly you become a moody person
    And laugh at whatever and cry on whatever
    The distance from your lover tortures you
    And his nearness comforts you
    He can simply disarm you with his smile
    Or a simple word of "I love you"
    He might drive you crazy by his mood swings
    Or makes you laugh when you want to cry
    He some times does silly things
    But they are always backed up by efficient words
    He might not like your actions all the time
    And tries to fix you
    But you know deep down that he loves you
    He might make you cry once or maybe twice
    But in a moment he can dry those tears and returns the smile
    He might demand explanations in unwanted times
    Or calls you things you certainly are not
    But you know that no matter what, you will always be patient with him
    Sometimes you feel like you want to smack him in the face
    Or just shake him back to sense
    But no matter what
    But if you ever come face to face, all you would do is blush
    He knows you well
    But he still says, I don’t you know that well
    When he's mad you better run away
    But what can I do?
    I can't leave him and run
    In the end of the day
    I say my prayers and hope next day
    We might talk
    And not fight again


    written by Me.





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  • thedarklord
    Newbie
    • Jan 2006
    • 9

    #2
    You had me at "funny" but you lost me at "your since of wisdom."

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    • Khorsheed
      Member
      • Nov 2006
      • 540

      #3
      oh really, and why is that?





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      • Dokhtar Bandari
        Member
        • Oct 2007
        • 1099

        #4
        Khorsheed jaan, its suppose to be "sense" not since...

        However, I admire you for your cantor and I think it takes a really special person to love so deeply and so unconditionally. Bravo.
        I would be true, for there are those who trust me;
        I would be pure, for there are those who care;
        I would be strong, for there is much to suffer;
        I would be brave, for there is much to dare.
        I would be friend of all—the foe—the friendless;
        I would be giving and forget the gift;
        I would be humble, for I know my weakness;
        I would look up and laugh—and love—and lift.
        Howard Walter

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        • Khorsheed
          Member
          • Nov 2006
          • 540

          #5
          ahhh yes! there is a mistake. sorry i didnt notice that when i proof read it

          thank you dear, but you know its a fault also, i've learned not to love like that, because it only ends in my damnation.





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          • Dokhtar Bandari
            Member
            • Oct 2007
            • 1099

            #6
            Originally posted by Khorsheed View Post
            ahhh yes! there is a mistake. sorry i didn't notice that when i proof read it

            thank you dear, but you know its a fault also, i've learned not to love like that, because it only ends in my damnation.

            No faults sweet heart. We human are a perpetual learning machine, we have to experience to know even if it means pain. So have a glass a wine and say it with me....besalamatee....love and love some more. More love the better.
            I would be true, for there are those who trust me;
            I would be pure, for there are those who care;
            I would be strong, for there is much to suffer;
            I would be brave, for there is much to dare.
            I would be friend of all—the foe—the friendless;
            I would be giving and forget the gift;
            I would be humble, for I know my weakness;
            I would look up and laugh—and love—and lift.
            Howard Walter

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            • indian_blues
              Member
              • Aug 2006
              • 1893

              #7
              faults makes more humane, and I love to be more human.

              btw a quote on love "If everything is imperfect in this world, love is perfect in its imperfection" - Ingmar Bergman (from the movie "The seventh seal")
              “I want to feel passion, I want to feel pain. I want to weep at the sound of your name. Come make me laugh, come make me cry... just make me feel alive.”

              If you wish to be loved, show more of your faults than your virtues. - Edward Bulwer-Lytton


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